Thursday, October 9, 2008

Simile Poems

Since we spent a few days working on similes and last week our reading lessons were focused around poetry, we decided to write a simile poem. We were able to pick any topic we wanted. We wrote the poems in class and then took them up to the computer lab and Mrs. Hill helped us type them up! Please keep in mind they typed them by themselves! In the lab they added all kind of cool colors, borders, and fonts. Unfortunately on the blog they do not carry over! Even so, they are adorable!
Here they are:

Butterfly
By:Mikayla
It was as yellow as a daisy.
It was as quiet as a mouse.
It is as soft as a kitten.
It tastes like a leaf.
It smells like a cupcake.

Dragons
By: Eli
It was as scaly as a fishes hide.
It was as sharp as a sword.
It was tasting blood like a wet ruby.
It was musty like dry blood.
It was as roaring as lightning.

Fight Plane
By: Jake
It looks like a plane with guns.
It sounds like a loud wind.
It feels like medal
It Taste like fire.
It smells like a grill on fire.

Grandmas Cookies
By: Casey
It smells like its fresh from the oven.
It’s as soft as a feather.
It looks as brown as chocolate syrup.
Its sounds as hot as hot chocolate.
It tastes as good as Hersheys.

Lego Ship
By:Cameron
It looks as gold as my covers
It sounds as real as a car
It feels as bumpy as a jet
It tastes as bad as rocks
It smells like some dirt.

Legos
By:Thai
They look like a bunch of rainbows in the sky.
CLLIIINNG uh-oh they broke and it sounded as loud as a T-Rex roaring
It feels as hard as a rock.
It tastes as weird as dirt, eeww!
It smells as unusual as paper.

My bionicles
ByJack B.
The mask of life is as bright as a flash of light!
It sounds like thunder.
It feels like fire!
It tastes like rurbber.
It smells very weird.

My Cat
By:Sammie
It looks like a Halloween cat roaming outdoors
Sometimes it’s as quiet as a mouse
It feels as soft as a pillow
It doesn’t taste good
Sometimes it tracks smells around the house
If you ever see my cat outside please return it!

My cookie
By:Nathan
It is as brown as a chocolate cake.
It is as silent as the wind.
It feels like a gooey circle.
It tastes like a tasty chocolate cake.
It smells like delishous chocolate ice cream.

My dog benny
By :Jack L.
It looks as small as a apple.
It sounds as loud as someone screaming.
It feels as soft as a cloud.
It taste like rotten fish.
It smells like an air wick.

My hamster Jo-jo
By:Josephine
He looks as black as black berries and as brown as almonds.
He sounds as quiet as the night sky.
He is softer then a barn owl!
He is as squishy and crunchy as a cokroch with a gummie.
He stinks like a dump but he is perfect to me!

My House
By Aubrey
My house looks as yellow as a lemon.
It sounds like a broken stick and
a dropped brick.
It feels as smooth as a lime.
It smells like garbage.

My Kitten
By:Alex
One day I was petting my Kitten when he purrs it is like music to my ears. He looks like an angel. He’s fur is as a pillow. He tasted like a kitten to He smells like cat food.

My lego casle
By: Ian
It looked as cool as a firework.
It souned as quiet as a rock
It felt as bumpy as a tree.
It tastes as duscting as a dog.
It smelled as perity as a bottle of perfume.

My Puppy Izzy
By:Kinsey
She looks as cute as me!
She sounds as if the stars twinkle
Left, as if they twinkle right.
She feels as soft as clouds.
She tastes like a iky dog say,
Like a wet bone.
She smells like I put the
Perfume I like on her.

Steak
By: Michael
It looks like a bone with bones.
When it comes out of the pan it sounds like a rock star band.
It feels as soft as a sausage.
It tastes like pork chop burning hot!
It smells like a pie coming out of my oven.

The beach
By:Ryan
It looks like a place with sand as yellow as the sun
It sounds like waves crashing down
It feels like a wet as the ocean
It tastes like it’s a lot of wet
It smells like air

The night time sky
By:Trey
The stars look like glitering gold.
The sky sounds like a crickit chorping
The sky is as cold as ice.
The stars tastes like flaming hot cheetos.
The night sky smells like the pool

The nintendo
by: hailey
It looks as pink
as
Strawberry ice cream. It
Sounds like A loud
Beep. It feels hard
As wood. It tastes like
Rocks on the street. It
Smells like clear air
From outside.

THE ROAD
BY: LUKE
It looks like a black night.
It sounds like rocks banging together.
It smells like dry clay.
The road taste like rocks.
Its as hot as a star.

1 comment:

Instructional Technology said...

It was as fun reading them as it was to write them! Way to go students!