For the last month in science we have been learning all about the human body.  We ended our unit with some  culminating centers.  These centers included a joint hunt, testing their respiratory rate, researching an organ, and writing a RAFT about the process of digestion.  The RAFTS turned out so great I couldn't resist putting them on the blog.
Role- piece of food
Audience- another piece of food
Format- Letter
Topic- telling them about their journey through the digestion system
 The kids started typing them in the computer lab today and then finished in our classroom.  They are all child typed with their spellings. 
Please enjoy!
Dear Chicken,
It’s me Cow.  I was dinner today.  I started out on a plate.  Then this kid ate me.  He was chewing me and swallowed me and I went down the Esophagus.  Then I went in the Small Intestine.  Then the Large Intestine.  Then I was dead and got pooped out.
       From Cow
(Aubrey Armes-Johns)  
Dear Popcorn
I was eaten yesterday.  It was like this.  In the mouth there were teeth that hurt.  Then you go down… and down.  When you enter the stomach it breaks you down.  Then small intestines suck you up.  Then you go into the big intestines.  Last you tern into poop P U.
Sincerely your friend,
Hamburger with cheese or cheesburger
(Alex Blaudow)
Dear spinach,
Hello,Im already flushed down the toilet.
First,I went inside the mouth.
Next,I went down to the stomach,I saw the liver!
 Then, I went into the small intestant,I saw some mushed  coming my way!
Then, I went into the large intestant, I saw the same food coming my way!
Last, I fell into water, I smelled the brown thing next me.
It smelled desqusting.
I heared a flush and I was GOOOOOOONEE
From pizza
p.s. his teeth were yellow.
(Jack Boran)
Dear brownie,
I’m being grinded with icicles’! 
I’m going down a rollercoaster!!
(Esophagus) SCREECH! CRASH!!  I’m at a dead-end!
FWOOSH! I flew in an  oafish shape  thing
(stomach) hey!-CLUNK! My audience something  fell
On  me. Decription :white  crysteish  tastey   fluffy.       
I belive it was marshmallow
If  you ask me.  Cu-CLUNK! Hey hi ma OOFFFFF! I’m……being………squased.. AAAAHHHHHHHHHHH  oooooooo   aahhhhhhh   I’m  in a hose!  ( s intastin)…...
AAAAHHHHHHHHHHH  oooooooo  aahhhhhhhh  I’m  in a bigger hose! (l intestine)
………….. PLIP! Hey! I’m in a tub of lemonade and other brownies! WHIRL  POOL!..
Sewage..gross!
Now icky,                                                                                                                                              
Fudge
(Josie Caporini)
Dear Carrot,
I got eaten today.
I had to travel through the Esophagus to the stomach.
I was churned around in very small pieces.
Walls of the small intestine absorb vitamins into the bloodstream.
Food that cannot be digested is pushed into the large intestine and pooped out.
From,
Apple
(Jake Faiella)
Dear Strawberry
       I, grape, was   eaten on   Saturday.  I   went down a tube no I am
pretty  sure  it  was  the  esophagus. Then I landed  and  it  hurt  a lot
because  it  felt  hard.  Then  I  fell  in  a bag, it was the stomach.
It felt cool when I landed because I jumped back up and then back
down and didn’t jump back up. But then, I turned brown and fell
again and it was like a slide. I passed the small and large intestine
and fell very fast and went down, down, down, down.
 Then I fell in to the toilet because I was poop. Hi mom, no don’t
Flush! Mommy oh no it’s me that’s me falling too. Help
I want my dad oh hi dad!
 Chew,
   Grape
(Kinsey Ganson) 
Dear Pretzel,
I was digested today.  I went through the mouth.  Down the esophagus.  Then down to the stomach.  Then to the small intestine.  Then the large intestine. Then I was pooped out
Sincerely
Hamberger
(Ryan Haley)
Dear Cake,
One day I was sleeping then I get hurt badly.   That woke me up.  I was in someone’s mouth!  Then I fell down!  Then I felt another grape on me! I went in the stomach! Oh! How unpleasant!  I was getting grinded up.  How could that happen? I went through the small intestine, it was like a roller coaster. I felt like I would never stop!!! Then I went into the large intestine.  It was less like a roller coaster.  Then the bathroom.  OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I went in the toilet.  Down I go!!! The other group was there too!  Bye Bye!
From,
Grape
(Jack Landmark)
Dear Chicken,
       Somebody ate me!  Well, I went through this tube, and it was not
Comfortable,   at all!  Then, somehow I got broken up into tiny little pieces.
Then, I went through something that was like a slippin slide, `I did it twice.
I turned brown, and now I’m  sitting  in something white, and  now  I’m
Sitting here with my family waiting to see what will happen next!
                                                                                      Love,
                                                                                               Brown Pizza
(Sammie Losee)
 Dear Popcorn,
I, the chocolate cake, was swallowed today.  First, I went into the mouth.  Next, I went down the esophagus how scary . Then, I  went into the stomach that little bag  tried to crunch me up . Then I went into the small intestine  when I was in there I couldn’t  even
See my  own  chocolate body . Then I went into the large intestine. Last, ewww ewww ewww  then I  became  poop.
Your  friend,
The chocolate cake
(Hailey McJunkin)
Waffle
You won’t want to go do OWIE! In there.  Whoa!  I’m going down the esophagus.  Where am I? I’m in the stttoooooomach!  This hurts, OWIE!  It’s the asied.  STOP!  It!  I’m I’m in the small intestOWIW!ine.  Now!  I’m in the large OWIE! Intestine.  Man I don’t like toilet water!  Then you go out!  Mom, where are you?!
(Luke Moorer)
Dear Banana,
I  just  went  down  the  digestive  system.  First  I  got  bitten  into  little  pieces  then  I  went  down  the  esophagus  and   into  the  stomach.   Half  of  my  body  into  the  small  intestine and  the  other  half  into  the  large   intestine.  I  am  now  all  alone  in  this  world  pool. 
From,
Apple
(Trey Oliver)
Hi Hot Fudge,
Guess what I just  went on the greatest adventure of my  life! I first got hit by these white things[Teeth]. Then I went down a slide [Esophagus]. WHOOSH! Then inside this big circle[Stomach]. Then little elves started poking me[chemicals].Then I was small enough to enter a blood stream. WHEE! Then all my energy got sucked out  with the small intestine. Then the parts of me that couldn’t stay got sucked in the large intestine. Then I got out of the body and went down in whirlpool!
                                                                              Your friend,
                                                                                                  Brownie
(Casey Peterson)
Hello Food,
I am just being softened up.
Now I am going down the  Esophagus .
Now I`m in the stomach. I`m into the small intestine. Boy, that
was fun. Now it` s into the large intestine. No ! I`m  turning brown! Plop! 
Half mercy! No! Don` t  flush!
From,
Pizza
(Cameron Puopolo)
Dear Apple Slice,
Im going down the digestive system-oh there is the lungs and ribs!
Im all broken up!
Now Im in the stomach!
Ahhhhhh ouch oooo eee!
Im  eee being oooo broken ouch up!
Now I am in the small intesnes.
Feeww Im poop and in the toilet.
Good bye.
Your best friend,
Apple Seed
(Thai Richter)
                                                                       
Dear grape,
I got eaten by somebody named Michael, first spit came out and I was grossed out by it. Then I went in the esophagus and I started to think I would not have enough room left. Then I fell in the stomach and it started to brake me up! Then I fell into the small intestine and I got broken up! Then I fell in the large intestine I was about to die, but luckily , I was to small to be smashed again and then I got out in the toilet and I went to the sewer and I floated all the way to a ocean .There I lived happily.   
 From,
Goldfish
 From: U.S.A
To: China
(Michael Shi)
Dear Mrs.  Potato
WOW!  BAM!  CRASH!  I just fell in a persons mouth !  WEEE!  I’m going down a
Waterslide.  OUCH!  SON!  You hit me.  Great now I’m crumbled up.  OH! NO!  NOW
I’M IN THE DIGESTIN SECTION!  I can’t swim I can’t swim!  Now I’m in the large
Intestine!  IGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  now I’m the small intestine .  oops I fell BAM!!
OH MAN!  I’m  poop.
From  your pal Mr. Tomato.
(Nathan Suki)
Dear food,
 I got eaten. Today  it felt good you should do it some day. First I went  down
 the tube second I went to the stomach third I went to the small. Intestine 
sistom  and last I went to the  big intestine sistom. And  the best part I got
pooped out. I sol lots of food and water. I ternd in to small peces by the
 diejestive sistom. Because it broke me in TONS of pecese.
 Your friend,
pie
(Ian Underhill)
Dear Popcorn,
       I the Chocolate cake have been eaten!
I have been chewed up and now I’m in the esophagus. Next is the STOMACH  AHHH! Cool the small intestine. The large intestine is scary!!! I’m melting I’m melting! Soon I will be pooped out. So long for now
 Your Friend,
Chocolate cake
 P.S. Bye forever!
(Mikayla VanJaarsveld)
Dear spinach,
Ow!   Ow!  Someone is chewing me up!  GUG!  Hey,they swallowed me!  WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAH!!!!!!  What sort of slide is this?  The esophagus I suppose?  OH NO!!I will go into the stOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWmach!!  The ow!  Walls ow!  Of the stomach are crunching me up!  ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!  A nice long swimming pool. I never knew the small intestine could be so comfortable!  EEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!  I’m turning into this icky brown stuff in the large intestine!  I suppose I’m going to join you in the toilet.
-Rice pudding      
(Eli Wolf)
Tuesday, February 3, 2009
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